Grade-B I think... Wording and images are IMAGINATIVE and MOSTLY APPEALING to aSPECIFIC audience. The final product is VERY APPROPRIATE and MOSTLY PROFESSIONAL, and shows a VERY GOOD LEVEL OF TECHNICAL SKILL.The audience have a GOOD IDEA OF WHAT TO EXPECT from the product.MANY CONVENTIONS have been used.
I agree that your actual advert is a B grade. I think at the moment your analyis is a C grade. You have some good comments but could go into more detail in places. For example:
* green and yellow are also colours associated with energy and this might suggest the product will make people more energised
* The Caution sign / symbol will appeal to young men who like danger and risk and will make your product seem exciting etc
* Your wording "Be agressive, be different, be the beast" has the power of 3 repetition in it which will help people remember it.
* Your can is red coloured so that people can guess what flavour it is before they even see the raspberry wording on it.
Grade-B I think...
ReplyDeleteWording and images are IMAGINATIVE and MOSTLY APPEALING to aSPECIFIC audience. The final product is VERY APPROPRIATE and MOSTLY PROFESSIONAL, and shows a VERY GOOD LEVEL OF TECHNICAL SKILL.The audience have a GOOD IDEA OF WHAT TO EXPECT from the product.MANY CONVENTIONS have been used.
I agree that your actual advert is a B grade. I think at the moment your analyis is a C grade. You have some good comments but could go into more detail in places. For example:
ReplyDelete* green and yellow are also colours associated with energy and this might suggest the product will make people more energised
* The Caution sign / symbol will appeal to young men who like danger and risk and will make your product seem exciting etc
* Your wording "Be agressive, be different, be the beast" has the power of 3 repetition in it which will help people remember it.
* Your can is red coloured so that people can guess what flavour it is before they even see the raspberry wording on it.
ANALYSIS = 6/10 = C