Could you change the title of this post to "My Final Advert"?
I like the advert as it has a clear selling point. In order to improve this, you could think about * Changing the font of the word "beast" as I dont think it looks very beast-like / agressive etc * Curving the writing on the can slightly so it looks like it follows the roundness of the can (I can show you how to do this)
Could you change the title of this post to "My Final Advert"?
ReplyDeleteI like the advert as it has a clear selling point. In order to improve this, you could think about
* Changing the font of the word "beast" as I dont think it looks very beast-like / agressive etc
* Curving the writing on the can slightly so it looks like it follows the roundness of the can (I can show you how to do this)
PRODUCTION = 4/5 = B